How can I conclude my essay over bulimia?
It has to take a stand, a side, or draw an overall conclusion. My thesis was that CBT cognitive-behavioral therapy is the most effecive treatment BUT i found out that there isn’t a treatment that’s is more effective than others.
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November 25th, 2009 at 9:25 am
Therfore, there isn’t a treatment that’s is more effective than others. Or something.
Just answer your Introduction. You didn’t give so much info. Hope this helps.
November 25th, 2009 at 9:25 am
Puke on the paper.
November 25th, 2009 at 9:25 am
" overall, it had come to a conclusion where eventhough CBT cognitive behavioral therapy is the most effective treatment, I had found out however there is a more effective treatment?"
i’m sorry, i don’t get what you meant by the last sentence .. but that would be my conclusion .. somewhere along that line
November 25th, 2009 at 9:25 am
Your thesis IS kind of your conclusion, just at the beginning. So I would suggest just changing it, then reaffirming it in the conclusion.
If it was a hypothesis sort of thing, you could simply say that you were wrong. But when you have a thesis, you want to prove that you are right.